KARLA LORELAY ANGELES BLANCAS A01167786
Travel
to different countries is my dream since I was child because I’m interested in
learning more about Germany, France, Australia, etc. I think that all the
courses that I've taken and my experiences have prepared me for these kinds of
programs and new experiences in different ways.
To
be candidate, a person need to have three important things:
1.-
Be student in Tec. De Monterrey
2.-
Take four semester onwards
3.-
Speak English
I
think, I’m a good candidate for this program, but I can take it in three
semesters.
I
know different things about my country and others, and is so easy to me explain
these things in English or Spanish, if someone ask me about Mexico, I would say that is a beautiful place in
which the climates are so variables. Be part of this program can help me in
international experiences.
I
want to be accoutered and this program let me study in the best schools for
accounting, some places that recommend me are Germany and Australia so I’ve
started to investigate about these countries and their traditions. I have never
traveled outside Mexico, but now I think that is important to know about the
world.
I
want to start my travel with a program that let me be part of a country and
help me to increase my English vocabulary and ITESM-CEM programs are the best
option for me.
I
hope that you will consider my application.
That was an interesting entry. I just want to make sure that you know you combined the explanation of the program and your personal statement, is it ok? did you do it intentionally? If so, it's OK...
ResponderEliminarCheck these mistakes:
Grammar:"Been part"
Spelling:"important thinks"
Vocabulary: "I’m interesting"
I suggest studying the difference of -ed/-ing in adjectives: http://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/ed-and-ing-adjectives-describing-feelings-and-things
Yes teacher, I used the personal statement that we saw in the class but I put the things that I thought were important for be part of this program, and the "been part" I don't understand so well why is it incorrect, can you explain me why teacher??
ResponderEliminarI really like to investigate about this kind of programs because one of my dreams is:
ResponderEliminarTRAVEL TO A DIFFERENT COUNTRY AND LIVE A LOT OF EXPERIENCES
This program let me make this dream true and I can study like a counter :3
What do you mean with "study like a counter"?...
ResponderEliminar"BEING part of this program...." is the correct option, why? because we check on Friday that we use gerunds (ING) as subjects.
We also check on Friday, infinitives for purpose, and adjectives + infinitive. So.. why is this sentence incorrect: "I thought were important for be part of this program"?
I can't edit the first comment but is (I thought were important for being part of this program).
ResponderEliminarWith the phrase (study like a counter) I want to said that this program let me course the subjects that are in the program of my master.